Strangers Once More
Strangers once more
Let us become
I forget everything
Like you were never the one.
Memories washed
For innocent eyes
A free mind
No more cries.
My life will change
I know for sure
Only if we could become
Strangers once more.
posted by xubayr at 10:14 PM
5 Comments:
wow thats a coincidence, jus yesterday i wrote a short article on the concept of becoming strangers once again on my blog(thanks for ur comment), and ive been wanting to write a poem on it too, but after reading urs i think that watever i write will look like i stole words from u, what i mean to say is that reading your poem was like reading my own ideas and thoughts. i will have to think of another topic to write on ;)
Yes, it was your article that prompted me to write this. It was just impulsive and I found the words to my poem. I even had these lines which I didn't publish ...
Head held above
Shoulders wide
In the open land
I walk with pride.
Fearless I become
Win every game
Build my own world
Written under my name.
My life will change
I know for sure
If only we could become
Strangers once more.
some unpublished lines here too-
Those silent hours frozen in time
when a stranger's breath mingled with mine,
our hearts beat out together
as we watched our souls entwine.
Life has brought us back to where
we dont recognize each other anymore,
everything has changed and yet nothing has
strangers we were, strangers we are once more
so where did u want to use my poem? or have u changed ur mind?
Sana I want to see your blog! lost the touch since yahoo360 is no more now
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